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you make my head hurt
like alcohol
and bad perfume
intoxicated with you
in you
around you
venomous coos
drip from your
carnivorous fangs
eating me whole-
now we are one
like alcohol
and bad perfume
intoxicated with you
in you
around you
venomous coos
drip from your
carnivorous fangs
eating me whole-
now we are one
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fine then, just leave me alone
let me rot in this "shithole" existence
you don't like it?
well it's none of your business
try to turn me around
put me on "the right path"?
it won't work
you haven't experienced such wrath
and then experienced the everlasting calm
but you'll never understand
all you know is the bad
all you remember is sad
i'm sorry you felt the need to cut me off
it's a real shame
and you weren't even involved
as if our friendship was a game
well i miss your friendship
you hurt me just as badly
as the one you criticize
still, i would renew our bond, gladly
if you weren't this way or that
stubborn, hard headed
just open you
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I am lonely.
Nobody tells me in pretty.
Nobody laughs at my jokes.
Nobody talks to me morning,noon or night.
I am so empty.
It is so dark.
I cannot stand it.
Look at you.
You smile.
You laugh.
Your eyes have a wildness I cannot explain.
Look at the way you move.
So proud,so free.
I cannot take my eyes off you.
I cannot get you out of my mind.
What was that?
You looked my way?
Was that a smile?
My heart is racing.
You shouldn't be allowed to affect me.
You do.
Do I affect you?
You kiss me.
You tell me,Yes I do.
You are warmth,both emotional and tangible.
It is oh so nice to have another heart oh so close to mine.
Never let me go.
Dear God I
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aggressive, you tell your therapist,
he's always been aggressive.
you detail the storms you weathered,
the verbal battering ram,
the hammer that kept falling until
the nail fell into place.
"he never hit me", you're quick to assure,
but you do speak, eventually,
about the threats, about the way he towered
over you, above you, through you,
the ways he threatened to hurt you &
the time you watched her fly into a wall.
but, but, but, but, but
you don't want to be unfair to him.
his demons are sharper-clawed,
bigger, scarier, more sadistic.
yours are a children'
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it is great to read...
My emotions try to compare it to several feelings right now, and all i can get is a relationship. This poem looks like the description of a relationship to me.
The last two lines thingy... You eat me whole, that one... If i were drunk or something, i would have been scared. But that's how human beings seem to oppress each other sometimes...
I love your work
The title...
It always makes me think too much about it
My emotions try to compare it to several feelings right now, and all i can get is a relationship. This poem looks like the description of a relationship to me.
The last two lines thingy... You eat me whole, that one... If i were drunk or something, i would have been scared. But that's how human beings seem to oppress each other sometimes...
I love your work
The title...
It always makes me think too much about it