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Barbie doesn't want to play.
She's angry about her hair.
I cut it too short.
The ends are jagged.
It looks like Ken took a hacksaw to it.
Though, it wasn't Ken,
it was me.

"Good girls always do as they're told," Ken huffs as he's got Barbie pinned to the wall.
He does things a six year old shouldn't know.
But, she does.
And it wasn't Ken.

It was me.
So, I was thinking about stuff and this is what I got! Yay feels!

Feedback is always welcome.
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, again, you are a brilliant and powerful (as I have always known).

For all the self-confidence you tell me you don't have, your writing voice says quite the opposite. It is strong, clear and so talented.
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you give me too much credit for my mind's strange musings about my childhood.
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is strage musings that have advanced us as a society...
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
quite possibly... but mine are all looking back and I am glued to them like the moth that kept chasing the light on the wall and ceiling... bouncing off to hit the ground and being completely inept at ever finding warmth in inanimate objects...
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Now, read what you wrote me aloud and tell me your not a poet... and a thinker...
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you... (yeah I ran off with that thought train... been thinking about moths)
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
me?

I'd like you to finish the "you" part..
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
just being ornery :hug:
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PossumFan Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oooh, wow... Creepy... In a sexy, good way! Great work!

+ fave
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you (=
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PossumFan Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :)
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tonepainter Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DLD...well deserved! :D
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here [link]
Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconblushingplz:
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Sigma-Echo-Seven Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Student Writer
I found this really terrifying, in a realistically innocent kind of way. It's subtle. Masterfully done!
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:squee:
That's exactly what I was going for and omg I can't believe I actually did it... Excuse me while I die now. :love:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! Just a note to let you know I've featured this piece in my journal: [link] :)
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:glomp:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh my goodness. Barbies doing explicit things. . . I'm pretty sure every one secretly had a few instances of that.
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol!
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