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i.
you were 22 years in the making,
a sponge without water
since the day they plucked you from the ocean
and left the sea salt to sink into your pores.

ii.
I was something too heavy to wade in,
barely able to breathe,
21 years in the making
with floodgates barring my emotions
since the age of four.

iii.
At the first sign of droplets,
the salt of you drew me in
and eased the heaviness of my heart.

iiii.
In your confessions of self-love,
in your tales of embrocation,
I was only ever your liniment;
our brevity
was a thing to be forgotten from the start.
this is for `FuzzyHoser because she likes fancy words.
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013   General Artist
so very lovely <3
congratulations on the DLD, dearling :huggle:
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you dear
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madameshadowenn Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome!
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student General Artist
hehehe "because she likes fancy words." This is beautiful. I love how even the arrangement of lines in this poem adds to the meaning for example "our brevity" being a significantly shorter line than the others. Ohrmerhgrsh. Your poems are just so amazing they make me want to scream.
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: you always make me feel so smart
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Vegetabelle Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Ha Ha! That's because you are smart!
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
congrats on the DLD ^^
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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